all my space
love at a molecular level
so much me
I cannot say
where this body ends
and desire begins
it is all one
Exquisite and concise – molecular, perhaps?
🙂 thank you! You are onto something with the molecular comment…
seamless fusion of whole and part in constant conversation and combinations threaded by the senses!
thank you–THIS little poem says what I was trying to say in those other clumsy ones this weekend–trying to catch something big with my net. Turns out I was using too many words to do it with 🙂
sometimes less is more…fusion of body and soul
You had me at the title.:) Love this! -Jennifer
Thanks, Jennifer 🙂
congrats on finding the big one in such a susanly-sensitive way. 🙂
…thanks for your help on targeting exactly WHAT it was…
You are AWESOME.
Not…just tuned in!
Some beautty should be sacred~ Wonderful wonderful wonderful ! Hug, Deb
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