desire

Posted on July 23, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

this want
threads through
all my space

love at a molecular level

so much me
I cannot say
where this body ends

and desire begins

it is all one

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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13 Responses to desire

  1. StevenKenwardWrites's avatar StevenKenwardWrites says:
    July 23, 2012 at 2:21 pm

    Exquisite and concise – molecular, perhaps?

  2. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar Noel Ihebuzor says:
    July 23, 2012 at 2:36 pm

    seamless fusion of whole and part in constant conversation and combinations threaded by the senses!

    • Susan L Daniels's avatar Susan L Daniels says:
      July 23, 2012 at 2:39 pm

      thank you–THIS little poem says what I was trying to say in those other clumsy ones this weekend–trying to catch something big with my net. Turns out I was using too many words to do it with 🙂

  3. unfetteredbs's avatar unfetteredbs says:
    July 23, 2012 at 3:25 pm

    sometimes less is more…fusion of body and soul

  4. jeglatter's avatar jeglatter says:
    July 25, 2012 at 12:44 am

    You had me at the title.:) Love this! -Jennifer

  5. Rhonda's avatar Rhonda says:
    July 25, 2012 at 1:46 pm

    congrats on finding the big one in such a susanly-sensitive way. 🙂

  6. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    July 27, 2012 at 2:30 am

    Some beautty should be sacred~ Wonderful wonderful wonderful ! Hug, Deb

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