Haiku Heights Prompt: Meaning

superstitious boy
hops across cracks in sidewalks
each leap meaning love

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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32 Responses to Haiku Heights Prompt: Meaning

  1. Leo says:

    Ah.. atleast those cracks are small 🙂 Here, we jump over one and land straight into the other 😛

    I hope the love in his heart and leap stays with him safely 🙂 Thanks for all the beautiful haiku over the last year, Susan. Hope to see you more over the next year at HH too.

    • Leo–thank you very much for providing the meme, and being such a wonderful poet…have enjoyed meeting you and the rest of the fantastic haiku geniuses through these weekly prompts 🙂

  2. Ramesh Sood says:

    How very thoughtful and unique..Susan !!

    Jumping over the cracks..is what gives joy and happiness and perhpas defines love.. you are a genius with words..

    Happy Haiku-ing..at Haiku Heights.. RS:)

  3. Claudia says:

    oh nice…i like the hopping across cracks instead of getting stuck in them..speaks to me and each leap meaning love is great as well…wonderful image, wonderful metaphor

  4. Grace says:

    And I hope he will never lose that faith and perspective ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/07/by-sea.html

  5. artmusedog says:

    each meaning love… wonderful line for a great haiku ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

  6. Mama Zen says:

    I love that last line! Splendid haiku!

  7. Green Speck says:

    Simple and sharp … brilliant as always 🙂

  8. What a wonderful interpretation of the theme. This is really a nice haiku.

  9. 4joy says:

    never expected the last line….nice

  10. kaykuala says:

    We often see different expressions of love being shown. Jumping along the sidewalk is fun anyway! Nice haiku, Susan!

    Hank

  11. doncarroll says:

    great take on the cracks in the sidewalk:) i still have a number of yours to get to. i’m looking to get to them tomorrow:)

  12. Rhonda says:

    brings great meaning to this simple childhood game. leave it to your heart susan to see this as an act of love. beautiful and makes me smile remembering my own kids doing it. 🙂

  13. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I can’t tell you how many times I broke my mother’s back when I was a child!

    Meaning in Shadows

  14. kkkkaty says:

    You make it seem so easy to put these out..it meant something back then and still should, as you remind us..

  15. Liked this very much.

    Melanie

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