drought breaking

thunder
is the sound
of sky tearing
to let down water

dust tamed to mud
the earth drinks

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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15 Responses to drought breaking

  1. nelle says:

    I’m feeling rather parched myself, so I can imagine.

  2. Jeremy Nathan Marks says:

    And maybe the Earth sighs. . . .

  3. Rhonda says:

    hihowareya hihowareya is that the beginning stanza of a rain dance? can you help a sister out here sfam? we need some relief!

  4. apocalypsepoet says:

    I’m left wanting so much more. — dust tamed to mud — fantastic!

  5. Thunderous wording !

  6. Mr. Walker says:

    Lovely. Enjoyed a bit of lightning, thunder, and rain myself yesterday.

    Richard

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