alive upside down

let’s live a day
breaking Newton’s law

shift roof to floor
in child-like play

& we can
fall out of bed

to the ceiling
& maybe swim in sky

the way fish do water
& it will not matter

how deep we dive
until we pass moon

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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16 Responses to alive upside down

  1. nelle says:

    Okay, this is lots of fun, and so creative!

  2. unfetteredbs says:

    I like how your mind works…
    love the new photo header

  3. doncarroll says:

    like this one susan. it just gives it a nice universal feel:)

  4. Rhonda says:

    I want to swim in the sky and pass the moon too! Maybe we can catch the Steampunk Flying Machine back to earth when we are ready….if ever!

  5. Nice! impish! creative! Remove stanza 2? Think not – just tweak it

    “shifting roof to floor
    in child-like play”

    what thinkest thou, duet partner?

  6. George Ellington says:

    Yes indeed — let’s!

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