everything went black

or did it just go
brain switched off
with a chemical snap

awareness rising
in bubbles
fizzing against the velvet side
of eyelids, opening to
sharper pain

& something missing

***prompt from Words From Windows

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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4 Responses to Surgery

  1. bricemai says:

    This is beautiful.

  2. nelle says:

    *flashback* I like this one lots, something we don’t often consider. Very observational and astute.

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