Haiku Heights Prompt: Vital

Posted on July 7, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

necessary joy
I thirst for you like water
and breathe you, my air

 

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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30 Responses to Haiku Heights Prompt: Vital

  4. Carol's avatar Carol says:
    July 7, 2012 at 12:37 pm

    Precisely ~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

  5. Jaideep Rao's avatar Jaideep Rao says:
    July 7, 2012 at 1:11 pm

    Vital lines,. air and water,. brilliant!

  6. Pranita's avatar Pranita says:
    July 7, 2012 at 3:18 pm

    Wow.. i could feel the importance of the one being referred to! Beautiful!
    Our day, her vital night!

  7. 4joy's avatar 4joy says:
    July 7, 2012 at 3:22 pm

    My thirst is also for joy….what else is the purpose of life but the quest for happiness….

  8. HaikuWater's avatar HaikuWater says:
    July 7, 2012 at 5:21 pm

    Vital sensualities here.

  9. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    July 7, 2012 at 11:05 pm

    I picture myself on a mountain top and a shimmering ~Alive waterfall ! Beautiful !

  10. kaykuala's avatar kaykuala says:
    July 7, 2012 at 11:22 pm

    Necessities of life all within us. Reminding and permitting!

    Hank

  11. Ramesh sood's avatar Ramesh sood says:
    July 8, 2012 at 3:43 am

    Very beautifully expressed..couldn’t have been more simply intense..

  12. Maharukh's avatar Maharukh says:
    July 8, 2012 at 12:59 pm

    Intense love haiku i did say.. meaningful! loved it 🙂 great one susan!

  13. Dewey Dirks's avatar Dewey Dirks says:
    July 8, 2012 at 8:23 pm

    Once again, nicely written

  14. gabrielle's avatar gabrielle says:
    July 9, 2012 at 3:47 pm

    Inspired. Reads like Rilke’s devotional poetry.

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