Haiku Heights Prompt: True

love shot from the heart
sings shining silver arrows,
speaks in a straight line

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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42 Responses to Haiku Heights Prompt: True

  1. George Ellington says:

    How very Cupidian of you, Susan. … No, I don’t think there is such a word, but I’m an English teacher, and I’ve always assumed the degrees bestow certain privileges towards my lexical experimentation. Call it fantasy if you will, but it helps me to keep myself entertained.

  2. unfetteredbs says:

    well done.. straight through..truth is felt

  3. maharukh says:

    truth is reflective in your haiku… blunt and honest as an arrow haiku 🙂

  4. Rosie Gan says:

    Hi Susan, my first time here. Like your haiku – wonder if the arrow ricochets when shot from the heart, and heads straight back, hmmm…
    Nice visiting you.
    Rosie

  5. Grace says:

    I like speaks in a straight line ~ I would suggest a comma after arrows, so that there are two images ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/06/morning-walk.html

  6. Pranita says:

    Cupid strikes! Lovely haiku…
    Dew drops of the dawn!

  7. artmusedog says:

    sings shining silver arrows ~ great words expressed in lovely haiku ~

  8. 4joy says:

    when love shoots from your heart, you can only hope the target is nearby! Lovely words..

  9. Rhonda says:

    no matter the distance of the target, if your aim is true, will hit it’s mark!
    love it sfam
    R

  10. HaikuWater says:

    The words to some whining 80’s song “your love is true” immediately took over the earwig portion of my brain — I’ve tried a hot shower, a cold shower, and a Q-tip, but they’re still stuck in there! I like the subtle use of true, as in defn. 6 “precise, accurate” !!

  11. nelle says:

    Right to the point, point to point.

  12. S Jayanth says:

    I am awestruck at the type of expression!
    3 marvelous lines. I am actually reading it over and over again.

  13. I like it! Well said.

  14. I believe this a principle of heaven spelled out in a shape of beautiful lines! Thanks again dear~Deborah

  15. I love this cupid-like haiku…. the heart will be pierced..

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/06/true-haiku-jule-1-2012.html

  16. doncarroll says:

    perfect susan. we all like to see some illusiveness in or writing from time to time. but in real life we like the straight line – no devisive schemes when it comes to the actions of the heart.

  17. Jaideep Rao says:

    “silver arrows,
    speaks in a straight line”,.love this!

  18. Amber says:

    Nice one, Susan!

  19. kaykuala says:

    Silver arrows shiny and straight ought to find it’s mark. Nice haiku,Susan!

    Hank

  20. Green Speck says:

    Beautiful depiction of love 🙂

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