By Noel Ihebuzor and Susan Daniels
Noel: If distances were not as long as dark lonely nights
Susan: The callous earth sees to it
that even our nights and days
oppose one another;
but, let us ignore laws of geography and physics
for this moment, and meet.
Noel: If feet could leap distances
ferried and nourished by fertile faith
if minds could travel long distances to their longings
Susan: Then I would fly to you, heedless of gravity, and mocking it;
the sky, neither night or day where we would answer each other
would blush, rivaling the colors of dawn, or of sunset, at our defiance
of the order of things, our audacity.
Noel: If mind, soul and body could paddle silvery
in soft warm lagoons
in canoes invisible to the uninitiated
Susan: Only light the way for us to find each other
Noel: If the journey of exploration
was a journey into the deep self
one of discovery and recovery
Susan: We would range farther
than the resonance of dream language,
sparks dancing past matter,
to a place where twin flames
recognize one other
and blend.
Noel: Would these harsh beginnings
not signal new becomings
and perfection end points
if only we
you and I could kill present addiction
to birth a future full that whispers and beckons
if, if you could, if we could
Susan: We would,
and in our waking walk together
generate something live
from these whispered ifs;
a pale hope, and fragile
unfurls into full-blown being;
yes, hope can dream and bring forth joy
as it breaks and buries bitterness.
Noel: If we could reach within ,
to find that lock to unlock a door
that holds us prisoners,
bound and shackled,
then we would unlock us
this us that currently
glides and drifts, inviting,
suggesting
Susan: Only unchain us,
that we might taste
even a tenth of what tempts us
into crossing these lines
of time, of space,
of who we are now
and who we could become.
***All I am going to say about this is wow, we did good Noel! Can’t think of anything else to add that wasn’t said above 🙂
Susan Daniels Poetry 
Nice. I’ve been to this place.
Thanks so much 🙂
Still trying to find a map to it.
very nice blend between the two of you. gonna pick two stanzas i like by each of you. noel’s stanza with soft warm lagoons, and yours is the stanza with dream language. clap clap overall.
Thanks so much, Don. I think this is the most powerful duet we have done so far 🙂
Gorgeous you two–I am smiling!:)
-Jennifer
Thanks, Jennifer–us, too (well, I THINK Noel is, and if not, he should be).
I’ve nominated you for an award…http://expertofnone.com/ – LOVE YOUR BLOG!!
Thanks so much, m’dear! This time, I will accept and not run away screaming.
Awesome!! I was trying to remember who all said they weren’t ready for awards yet, and I thought you were one of them, but glad I took the chance! It’s so well-deserved 🙂
Shucks, thanks!
Powerful IS one word. I can think of others. Wow you two…!!!
Thank you sweetie! I humbly accept!
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amazing piece. truly.
Thank you!
I TOLD you there was a better “if” poem coming!
and boy were you right. I almost commented with the “if” word…wow
Yeah–I smile every time I read this, I think we did that good 🙂 Cheers, Noel!
and boy were you right. I almost commented with the “if” word…wow…was actually going to say “if only”…”)