why we love

because I and you

melt & diffuse
into an us

of limitless joy;

your you & my I
ourselves blend
& abandon
all other possible we(s).

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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17 Responses to why we love

  1. Rhonda says:

    very nice susan…you are a natural ‘melder’! it’s quite sweet…:)

  2. nelle says:

    Love the flow of it all, and it slows me down to catch all the nuance. Along with it, you’ve put the Beatles I Me My in my head as I close in on bedtime. 😉

  3. Rhonda says:

    It works. Not a bad project to consider either. Do something this week that you add to next week…either to continue the theme or by adding something…completely change the tone. Could be fun and keep you moving ever forward.

    As to the praise comment…you know, that’s not unusual for ‘artists’. You are your own worst critics, never think you are as good as you are, and tend not to believe the good others say.

    B E L I E V E I T! !

  4. Nice! last line still has me thinking and scratching “me” head! – all other possible Wes! Diverse possibilities for multiple expressions of We and for “we-ing”? Chemistry meets physics!

  5. Ian Moone says:

    I think it works quite well

  6. jmgoyder says:

    Your writing is great! I wish I had more time to look at more of it right now – oh well, I can always look later. I like its concise sliciness if that makes sense!

  7. This is a psalm and a song~ absolutely beautiful Susan. THANK you ~Deborah

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