8 Responses to Hour (Saturday 5/5 Haiku Heights)

1. Grace says:

   May 6, 2012 at 11:31 am

   I like your haiku ~ Great contrast of gray versus sweet dreams on the tongue ~ Nice to meet you ~
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 6, 2012 at 12:48 pm

     Thanks so much, Grace, and thanks for stopping by.
2. Mr. Walker says:

   May 6, 2012 at 2:42 pm

   Susan, a lovely invitation. So much hinted at in that last line.

   Richard
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 6, 2012 at 3:19 pm

     Thank you, Richard–I am starting to adore so much what is not said in haiku.
3. Jaideep says:

   May 6, 2012 at 4:37 pm

   Can’t really figure out the best line, picture looks perfect-Haiku..
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 6, 2012 at 4:48 pm

     Thank you so much!
4. Loredana Donovan says:

   May 9, 2012 at 5:26 pm

   Very nice haiku. Agreed with Grace, I like the contrast of gray and sunshine 🙂
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 9, 2012 at 5:31 pm

     Thanks Loredana–and, thanks for stopping by. Btw, I love your name!

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