Posted on May 21, 2013 by Susan L Daniels

sometimes sky is less
window to stars
or blue we breathe

and more mouth

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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12 Responses to

  1. Dan0sz's avatar Daan van den Bergh says:
    May 21, 2013 at 11:33 am

    This really stirred up some thought!

    What is the sky telling you?

  2. beautifulorange's avatar beautifulorange says:
    May 21, 2013 at 11:58 am

    I love this. Captures the vastness and impossibility of knowing…

  4. unfetteredbs's avatar unfetteredbs says:
    May 21, 2013 at 7:22 pm

    Swallows us whole sometimes

  6. thecavesofaltamira's avatar Jeremy Nathan Marks says:
    May 23, 2013 at 11:23 pm

    This does stir up thought. And I like the spareness of it. Everything necessary for a good meditation is right there. Nicely done, Susan.

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