I read a book once
and I will write around its name
and call it simply
The ways to make love
and they are listed:
how to kiss
every part of the body
feed the self
on the river traced
by the tip of a tongue
and then two tongue tips
tasting, tangling, twining
to relish
the salt of each other
and that’s just the beginning
*** Prompt #2 for the day comes to us courtesy of Ramblings from a Mum.
Susan Daniels Poetry 
Very Nice Susan
Oh, thanks much, Bruce.
Oh my…this is something delicious!
Thank you! Jen’s prompt was loads of fun…
Glad I read yours after I wrote mine–I was hopelessly outsteamed. WM, you are a wonderful poet!
Beautiful sensuality, Susan. Thank you for your kind comment and I’m so glad you are a part of our poetry community.
Thank you so much, Victoria. Sometimes, a three-word prompt brings you a poem, fully formed. This was one of those lucky times.
ummmmm…. wonderful.
Oh, thank you, Jenni.
ooh la laaa lady . clap clap clap well done..smokin’
Gosh, thanks. Did you read WM’s yet? Glad I wrote this before I did, or I never would have…
I am just getting ready to read hers… something in the air tonight? smirk
Always…Always. 😉
yowsers .. hers is smokin good too
yeah, steamed my glasses up, she did.
did you read rambly? wowsers trifecta here
No, I have to go check it out…
Wow, she rocked it, and in such an original way. She told a story, a sexy one, in Victorian language.
all three of you rocked it.. my innocent face is all a blush
your innocent face needs to write a smashingly erotic poem to go along with all of ours, and make us blush too!
haa moi?
Oui, tu, madame. Tu n’est pas une vierge, oui? LOL.
I don’t understand a damn thing you just said to me.
I am on the verge of passing out?
🙂 worry not, madame–I just challenged you to put all of us hussies to shame…
mmm game on sister
YAY!
Ohhhh, sorry for the obnoxiousness in French… You know I love you, whether or not you play 😉
Cripes – I missed this Susan, and how fitting that it speaks of tongues. I want this to be the foreplay to my filth. It is romantic and beautiful, but there’s no harm in it leading to a shag!!
Oh, yours was no filth, but you can call this one foreplay if you like. I firmly believe that a good shag is romance and beauty at its best 😉
Damn straight!
or gay
or Bi
or wearing rubber…
hehehe!
These all work!***snickering along with you!
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Heh, these days I’m rather immune to such things, but I’m quite sure it’s a tad more engrossing than fifty shades of whatever.
LOL, I am sure, though the closest I have gotten to reading that are the spoofs.
I like this… I think that Mims is starting to seduce you with her ways… A lot of salty kisses! 😉
Eric, thank you! Yes, a lot of salt, as it was a prompt word 😉
wow susan… think i can turn the heat down now – that was SO. GOOD.
Miriam–thank you If you thought this was warming, wait until you get to Panda’s.
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Beautiful, Susan Understated sensuality
Thanks, C!