fall starts in glory–
summer dies & burns quiet
in layers i rake
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Susan Daniels Poetry 
you know i love this :).
Aw, thank you, Boomie!
Another beautiful piece 🙂
thank you, Green!
How beautifully you have weaved mood in seasons..liked it..
I am here…
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/her-glow-says-it-all.html
RS:)
Oh, thank you, Ramesh!
This is soooo very vibrant! Love the seasonal description in ur words!
Spiritual splendor shines!
oh, thank you, Pranita!
Wonderfully composed haiku … spirituality in there.
oh, thank you. Yes, just a bruskstroke or two 😉
Your words, as always, are so spot on! Each one carries its weight in the poem and you create a haiku with so much depth!
Oh, thank you, Barbara!
Delicious description of Autumn, nature and soul shine in your haiku.
oh, Dulcina–thank you!
You are so right on, Susan. I love your haiku. Each day it’s a special treat to read them.
oh, gosh, Elle–thank you!
splendid… and joyful
In layers I rake …. yes, indeed! Very nice, Susan 😉
September Heights – Sings Sun’s Glory
Thanks, Becca–one yard chore I do not mind one bit!
I love this haiku, wonderful imagery x
oh, thank you!
In layers I rake. Splendid line. Don’t over work, though. We need you strong and churning more stunning words. 🙂
Thanks, Celestine! 🙂 think I can manage both, since the other primarily involves me sitting on my butt 😉
I love this! Raking up the layers of summer… that’s just wonderful.
Patti, thank you! Love leaves–the color, the smell that always reminds me of tea for some reason…
perfect picture.
Thanks, SFAM!
Lovely image and words.
Melanie
Thanks, Melanie!
well painted!
Thanks, Noel. It is my season…well, not all mine, I am willing to share. i should say my FAVORITE season.
Ah I loved the progression you’ve used here.
Summer Dies is a strong imagery!
Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed.
I like the enigma in the last line…
Two Glories: Litter and Flower
Thanks, much!
love the word flow along with imagery forming.
🙂
Oh, thank you, Angela!