this smallness I am cannot hold
this feeling
that hums
& breaks into joy
did you plant it there
or is it always waiting
cradled in ribs
budded and quiet
until you whisper it open?
this smallness I am cannot hold
this feeling
that hums
& breaks into joy
did you plant it there
or is it always waiting
cradled in ribs
budded and quiet
until you whisper it open?
this is my new favorite…oh so lovely
Thank you, Audra! Blushing from the toes up now!
whisper it open is so beautiful as it speaks so softly and yet so powerfully! Nurture, nature and surges!
Oh, my, thank you.
I had to come back again and read one more time… I really do love this
Wow, Audra–thank you!
…I kinda like it lots myself 🙂
To have such big feelings…it is an amazing and continually surprising thing. And N is right…whispering it open….wow!
Beautiful SFAM…just beautiful. Has produced BIG FEELINGS
oh my, people, you are all reducing me to increasing shades of red–thanks so much!
yes, I like how easily this poem rolls one’s tongue, so beautifully said. Every line is magic. Ok one more read!
Oh, Joe–thank you so much! I am so glad you like it as much as I do!
feelings of glee were just coming out of those words I must say
You nailed it!