above

in this state
of spirit locked to matter
this mind, this head
thinks too highly of itself
separated from the rest of flesh
by a thin columnar neck

so we say, mind over matter
and not so much spirit versus flesh
because we can see the separation;
when all is the same animal
with spirit, with mind
all made magical
and together fused

unless, forgetting this,
this head fans its own greatness,
pure thought expanding like heated air
in a brilliant, rainbowΒ balloon

takes flight and floats me with it
to land who knows where

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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21 Responses to above

  1. Rhonda's avatar Rhonda says:

    I say sometimes a big head is needed to deal with big issues. as long as there is perspective and a string to bring it back down to earth…i say let it swell. you have anchors…they won’t let you float far.

  2. nelle's avatar nelle says:

    This made me laugh. Now I hear The Fifth Dimension singing, Up, Up, and Away. Enjoy the ride and the view!

    • I had fun with this one πŸ™‚ Have not ridden in a hot-air balloon in ages…Used to date a guy (right out of high school, I was) whose parents had a business, taking their balloon all over western New York πŸ™‚

  3. Your humor is so devilish – my knees quake (haha)

  4. your writing is inspiring.

  5. Bruce Ruston's avatar Ian Moone says:

    Ah good stuff and nicely put, personally I find it hard to get my ego overinflated more interested in inflating my Wit πŸ™‚

    • πŸ™‚ yes! All I can do is say that, as any discussion of inflation is bound to get someone to say something equally damning and silly, and this time, I am going to “rise above it.”

  6. Poem, wow! Comments and exchanges, even wow-er! sometimes, I discover I am too young to understand codes!

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