10 Responses to if we are one

1. Noel Ihebuzor says:

   May 24, 2012 at 5:01 pm

   there is a big IF, a big IF….there is also the assumption that the other party must feel the same we do and stil yearns for the things we yearn for……an IF and assumption that often set us up for frustrations and further pain! and you communicate this hope so wonderfully, so delicately, so hopefully!
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 24, 2012 at 5:05 pm

     Thanks, Noel–yes, a little word with huge meaning behind it 🙂
2. doncarroll says:

   May 24, 2012 at 8:27 pm

   from a relationship standpoint is all about working through it. but from the muse standpoint, i’d say it’s also about the muse making the writer stronger and being able to steer away from bitterness. that’s the way i see it. and this is very nice.
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 24, 2012 at 8:29 pm

     thank you Don 🙂

     Hopefully in both life and poetry, we can steer away from bitterness.
3. coffeehousejunkie says:

   May 24, 2012 at 9:20 pm

   I love the lines:
   “without bitterness/& I will abandon blame”
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 24, 2012 at 9:29 pm

     thank you.
4. Rhonda says:

   May 25, 2012 at 4:27 am

   Hope! Such a big little word. 🙂 lovely as usual
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 25, 2012 at 4:29 am

     Aw, thanks. It’s the little words that get me in trouble.
     • Rhonda says:

       May 25, 2012 at 4:30 am

       don’t they? so much power in such a little package. but they inspire don’t they?
       • Susan L Daniels says:

         May 25, 2012 at 4:31 am

         Yes!

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