kiss

Posted on May 22, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

one breath separates
craving from temptation

our lips meeting both

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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6 Responses to kiss

  1. Bruce Ruston's avatar Ian Moone says:
    May 22, 2012 at 5:14 am

    Very nicely done

  3. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar Noel Ihebuzor says:
    May 22, 2012 at 8:34 am

    I found the last two lines that dropped off as you were uploading and which you failed to notice!

    “stoking the former
    and stroking the latter”

    LOL! great poem you wrote, Susan!

  4. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    May 22, 2012 at 8:18 pm

    Pathos made flesh! Lovely Susan!

  5. Susan L Daniels's avatar Susan L Daniels says:
    May 22, 2012 at 8:20 pm

    Thanks, Deb 🙂

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