kindergarten

the teacher tells me
he must learn to color between lines
& flip his 9s in the right direction
so they look less like Ps;
the same with 3s and Es.

I know these
must march in precision
to eliminate alphanumeric anarchy,
& remember my own struggle
with 5 and S, which still look eerily similar
in my manuscript.

So, I bought him a box
of thick, primary-colored crayons
& told him to draw his own lines
& to cross them
whenever he wants,
with as much color
as he can.

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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8 Responses to kindergarten

  1. nelle's avatar nelle says:

    *applauds*

    *again*

    • πŸ™‚ Thanks Nelle–I want him to feel free to color outside of those lines! I think your piece, “Judgemental Influence,” triggered another memory I will have to write out…**gasp*** in prose.

  2. The beginnings of early writing, directionality and coordination…an engaged mother’s love…supporting but also releasing a child to explore and to be…..this is good!

  3. Dewey Dirks's avatar Dewey Dirks says:

    Very good poem Susan

  4. Rhonda's avatar Rhonda says:

    You go Mom! We don’t need no stinking lines!!! πŸ™‚

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