zoe’s evolution

She used to exhale that sweetness freely,
every pore pouring it out;
its presence softening
the diamond flash of her eyes

but girls learn early
the currency of charm,
and now she pays it out sparingly,
each penny precious

her inside sparkle
traded for a weekend with friends,
a day at the beach, a new novel
I will have to read first,
longer time on the phone.

How can we resist such trading,
our hands cupped
for the gifts she can spare.

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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10 Responses to zoe’s evolution

  1. Beautiful, this song on how children learn to handle parents and run winning campaigns! The charms of daughters are more potent on their fathers, I hear!

  2. jeglatter's avatar jeglatter says:

    Oh, hadn’t acknowleged this let alone worked to describe it. Yes, that is what happens, beautiful.
    -Jennifer

  3. nelle's avatar nelle says:

    Trade away… such good works I read today.

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