Clarity (Haiku Heights Prompt 4/28)

Posted on April 28, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

waking, I comb out
snarled colors/tangled dreaming
groomed to clarity

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pure clarity of
one drop of rainwater, poised
on a blade of grass

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birdsong, like bright bells
such rough, joyous clarity
ringing in the day

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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4 Responses to Clarity (Haiku Heights Prompt 4/28)

  1. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    April 28, 2012 at 1:58 am

    Extremely wonderful Susan ! You’ve got your brain going on all day! WONDERFUL ~Deborah

  2. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar noelihebuzor says:
    April 28, 2012 at 6:46 am

    beautiful – you succeed in making visible the invisible mental struggle we all go through trying to fix, distill and finesse inchoate and hazy thoughts that come to us in our dreams! and the joy we feel when we succeed!

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