melody (today’s haiku heights challenge)

Posted on April 25, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

mourning dove
melody balanced
on my rail

pulse–life’s melody
quiet, consistent murmur
humming beneath skin

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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4 Responses to melody (today’s haiku heights challenge)

  1. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    April 26, 2012 at 5:20 am

    Feelings ! Feelings are on my soul’s skin, it beautiful !

  2. Mr. Walker's avatar Mr. Walker says:
    April 27, 2012 at 12:35 pm

    Susan, both of these are lovely. I like the pulse as “life’s melody”.

    Richard

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