i want to sing your life
or smile it
but loss carries me past words
Not the worst. Simple and says it all. Hugs
bless you sfam. (hugs)
Good depiction of thoughts !!!
I think those first two lines would be a wonderful eulogy for anyone, to hear those words or not hear them, either way.
I agree with trent. Heartfelt in three lines.. you do it so well Susan. Feeling your pain and your love
Audra, thank you.
Thanks, Trent. All I got last night…
All you needed. Sorry about your loss, saw that other post too. FYI, I thought about your symmetry and came up with this morning’s post as I saw it, I like symmetry but chaos took over.
ohhh–I shall go right over & check it out–I am in the mood for chaos this morning.
I believe simple words carry more power
loss is a powerful guide. may you feel held in her presence. thinking of you.
Nicely wrought. KB
a taste of Arrival, too, beyond our vision. This reminds me of Samuel Coolidge “Epigram.”
Oh, thank you Deb.
Lots of words not necessary. The wish to sift for the right ones, that’s what counts.
Thanks, Nelle. you are right.
last line says it all. that can also be for other things as well – tumultuous times.
Thanks,Don–and yes, it can.
Simple and moving
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