haiku heights: September heights–DAY 30!!!!!!

escaped balloons climb
sometimes miles before they drift–
several shades of free

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I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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43 Responses to haiku heights: September heights–DAY 30!!!!!!

  1. unfetteredbs says:

    congrats on completing the marathon. Nicely done. I have enjoyed reading yours..
    Sincerely,
    The Dropout

  2. Green Speck says:

    Freedom is a great thing to have !!!

  3. Several shades of free. I quite like that. Well done, Susan.

  4. elleceef says:

    “several shades of free” I like that too. Thanks for all your good writes this month – its been a pleasure reading them.

  5. brudberg says:

    Well done on completing, a party with balloons is well deserved.

  6. Delicious air up here!

  7. Great haiku, very nice written and very joyful … balloons what a party … really it’s wortth a party when you succeeded the September Heights challenge. Thank you for all the wonderful verses you have shared with us.
    I hope to read more haiku written by you Susan. Please visit: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.nl/ my new daily haiku meme starts next Monday October 1st.

    • It has been a pleasure reading yours, too (though I have some serious catching up to do, so I can spread the haiku joy out a little into this month–yay). Wow–I shall see if I can keep this up, it certainly has been fun!

  8. How very lovely and apt. Balloons to celebrate and the exhilaration of freedom. beautifully done, my friend. :-)

  9. “Several shades of free”…and here’s another: We’re free from trying to write to a daily prompt…at least for a while! It’s been a pleasure reading your work, and thank you for stopping by my blog.

  10. Mr. Walker says:

    Susan, I love that last line. Just a great image.

    Richard

  11. ‘Several shades of free’ – absolutely love that :)

  12. Karin Wiberg says:

    “Several shades of free”–very nice! And I am so impressed you’ve been able to write a haiku a day AND your other poems! Well done, Susan!

  13. Barbara says:

    This is such a joyful and appropriate final haiku/haiga. A party to celebrate completing the challenge! I’ve enjoyed reading your poems and your encourabing words. Hope to see more of your poetry!

  14. “Several shades of free”….Awesome line Susan….Beautiful haiku!
    Balloons truly symbolize freedom!

    Peace in prison

  15. nelle says:

    Nice. And imagine a cloud-rider, awash in a place of cloud-riders. How different a perspective. :-)

  16. Patti says:

    This is delightful and uplifting. I love it, especially the several shades of free. I’ve enjoyed reading your haiku and comments on mine during our little adventure. Thank you.

  17. dulcinaandgnome says:

    Again a superb haiku for a beautiful image, Susan.
    It’s been a great month, indeed. I have learnt a lot about haiku reading yours and others’
    A pleasure sharing your words.
    Hope freedom is more than “shades” in the future.
    A hug and thanks. :)

  18. odyzz says:

    colorful freedom… :)

    Was under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge …
    Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS…being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull’s eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world…Loads of special thanks to each one of you…September had been very exciting and a learning month for me…I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure …Thanks a lot once again…keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly…

  19. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I think I would like to emulate the escaped balloons! :)

    Seed-Free Pod

  20. Bruce Ruston says:

    funny you should mention the time-consuming part I have just caught up with this write

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