17 thoughts on “haiku heights: waltz”

1. Powerful haiku, Susan, the planets moving, more reel than waltz, yes.

   • thanks, Dulcina! I needed to go solar system today.

2. Nice Idea Planets dancing around the sun’s pull

3. This was unique … loved the waltz of the planets

4. Very nice, waltzing planets.

5. A powerful and unique take on the prompt, Susan.

6. Any kind of dance—reel or waltz—is good!

   Wilderness Waltz

   • Absolutely!

7. Thank you guys so much!

8. Strong! Love the final line…orbits spun dizzy..

   • Thanks, Barbara!

9. I love the contrast of reel and waltz–well done!

   • Thanks, Karin!

10. I like the idea of the planets dancing a reel and “spun dizzy” – Enjoyed this very much.

    • THanks, Elle!

11. Nicely played.

    • Thanks, Nelle. All I could see in my mind was an animation of all those crazy orbits

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