i go hunting to kill what is left of you in me

the trails are cold
& dead
but i will find the traces

wipe that last kiss
from my lips
because it stings

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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36 Responses to i go hunting to kill what is left of you in me

  1. George Ellington says:

    It needs to be so at times, doesn’t it. A cleansing process. A purifying. Before moving on.

  2. Green Speck says:

    The last kiss … stinging … wow, that was powerfully revengeful !!!

  3. Hmmm!
    dead trails in lairs curled
    cold lifeless
    and better left so!

  4. Bruce Ruston says:

    I can so relate to this, time for something new to kill all the tracks of hunting ex’s for me

  5. ~Lady Day says:

    Felt this..that sting of heart and lips..perfect.

  6. Seb says:

    That’s the way you do it…

  7. I love this! Simple and delicate with maximum oomph! I also really love the 3 line/2 verse format. Inspiring.

  8. unfetteredbs says:

    alot of emotion packed in these words.. written by a strong woman with a powerful pen

  9. Trent Lewin says:

    Love it. But I totally want more.

  10. chenayimoyo says:

    Scrub it so hard
    Till blood oozes out
    Fuck , a scar!
    Still reminds me of you…

  11. Yes, Susan, it rocks. And sometimes, the sting of the last kiss burns forever, no matter how much you want it off.. Very powerful lines. The blog background is so cool. Loves the Header, is that you or your daughter?

  12. I have the image of a knight in a medieval forest.

    This is “the quest” redefined.

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