haiku heights: birth

equinox, mabon
the wheel balances & turns
from birth to fading

there is evenness
between light and dark today,
the birth of autumn

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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35 Responses to haiku heights: birth

  1. Rhonda says:

    Happy Autumn Susan…sad to see the summer end? Everything seems to be moving so fast, let’s enjoy the fall, okay?

    • Happy autumn, SFAM! No–not sad in the least–autumn is my favorite season. Just playing with the prompt from HH today. On the equinox, to have the word be birth, I could see no other way to write these haiku but from the perspective of a wheel of seasons/life.

  2. brudberg says:

    Here in Sweden this is so scary moving into darkness

  3. Ramesh Sood says:

    Evenness between dark and light…I loved it ..beautiful..

    RS:)

  4. Patti says:

    Autumn is my favorite season and I always feel a “quickening.” Your haiku speaks to me. Thank you.

  5. Kathy Donlan says:

    Loved it . . . reflective. like the evenness of light and dark

  6. Paperheart says:

    I Loved the second series: Full of images.

  7. poetrydiary says:

    Enjoyed the second one – beautifully balanced and expressive (and true).

  8. unfetteredbs says:

    lovely use of the prompt Susan. I like the sense of time you created

  9. elleceef says:

    These are perfect for the beginning of Autumn. The second is my favourite although I like “from birth to fading” too. I am on the fading end LOL Thanks so much.

  10. Green Speck says:

    A good tribute to autumn :-)

  11. dulcinaandgnome says:

    Fall means balance to me, my fave season which you have described so well in your haiku. :)

  12. That is very clever ~ mixing the science with the poetry!

  13. Jolly says:

    Spring was just born here, so it’s a different kind of quickening. Even so, you’re right, the light and dark are balanced. Nice set.

  14. ALWAYS praying for your peace~ this is electrically stimulated ~ Blessings friend

  15. nelle says:

    If only we could equalise other things in life.

  16. Me loves the first one.

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