haiku heights: glory

fall starts in glory–
summer dies & burns quiet
in layers i rake

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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37 Responses to haiku heights: glory

  1. boomiebol says:

    you know i love this :).

  2. Green Speck says:

    Another beautiful piece :-)

  3. Ramesh Sood says:

    How beautifully you have weaved mood in seasons..liked it..

    I am here…

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/her-glow-says-it-all.html

    RS:)

  4. Pranita says:

    This is soooo very vibrant! Love the seasonal description in ur words!

    Spiritual splendor shines!

  5. Wonderfully composed haiku … spirituality in there.

  6. Barbara says:

    Your words, as always, are so spot on! Each one carries its weight in the poem and you create a haiku with so much depth!

  7. Dulcina says:

    Delicious description of Autumn, nature and soul shine in your haiku.

  8. elleceef says:

    You are so right on, Susan. I love your haiku. Each day it’s a special treat to read them.

  9. splendid… and joyful

  10. becca givens says:

    In layers I rake …. yes, indeed! Very nice, Susan ;-)
    September Heights – Sings Sun’s Glory

  11. I love this haiku, wonderful imagery x

  12. In layers I rake. Splendid line. Don’t over work, though. We need you strong and churning more stunning words. :-)

  13. Patti says:

    I love this! Raking up the layers of summer… that’s just wonderful.

  14. Rhonda says:

    perfect picture.

  15. Lovely image and words.

    Melanie

  16. Paperheart says:

    Ah I loved the progression you’ve used here.
    Summer Dies is a strong imagery!

  17. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I like the enigma in the last line…

    Two Glories: Litter and Flower

  18. love the word flow along with imagery forming.
    :)

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