36 thoughts on “Haiku heights: lights”

1. Very sweet. Evocative. Sometimes that is all I need. A moment of peace. And memory.

   • thanks, George–me too.

2. A wonderful image you’ve painted here with your words. I love the scenery of the campfire.

   • Oh, thank you. I just love my sparks–from campfires or fireflies

3. Beautiful how you evokes early summer AND late summer at the same time!!

   • Oh, thank you, Barbara!

4. This creates a whole scene and sense of place, and I am 20 years younger, reading this.

   • Matthew–thanks so much!

5. Enjoyed your haiku so much. It brings back many wonderful memories of camp fires in the past.

   • Oh, thanks so very much!

6. Another nicely written Susan

   • Dewey, thanking you!

7. Fireflies and bright sparks are mesmerizing! Nicely Susan!

   Hank

   • Hank–thanking you!

8. Beautiful word association here. I was almost transported !!!

   • Jolly, thank you!

9. Fireflies are really beautiful !!!

   • Thanks, GS–my favorites!

10. Evocative, fireflies should be always in our lives…
    Very beautiful!

    • Oh thank you! I wish they were…such a fleeting summer nighttime beauty they have.

11. Wonderful and evocative Haiku

    • Thanks, Celestine!

12. love the themes and amazing haiku.

    • oh, Sasha, thank you!

13. Fireflies and campfires take me back to carefree summer nights. Lovely, Susan.

    • Thanks, patti. I am just now thinking about toasted marshmallows/s’mores, lol.

14. Some bright, some burning out. May the good ones always glow.

    • Nelle–as usual, love your comments–they always add depth.

15. To my imagination, those stirred sparks rise like fireflies on a June evening…

    Three Lights

    • Yes, they do!

16. your words shine.
    superb talent.

    check us out, welcome contributing a random poetry or a haiku.

    • Oh, my goodness, thank you! I will check you out right now

17. Yes! Those sparks are like fireflies. I love both, but never connected the image. Thanks Susan, so good!

    • Oh, Rhonda–thank you! I am all about those sparks

18. Four lights in this haiku–no darkness here. Really enjoyed this one

    • Thanks so much for commenting

      Nice to “meet” you.

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