September heights: Revelation

my revelation
shows everything hidden in
this tentative heart

 

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I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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42 Responses to September heights: Revelation

  1. Aw, love this Susan, very tender :-)

  2. Kathy Donlan says:

    I love the last line.

  3. Good one … that last line … is wonderful.

  4. Barbara says:

    Ah beautiful… the tentative heart!

  5. So lovely and sweet.

    Melanie

  6. Patti says:

    Very romantic. I agree. The last line is wonderful.

  7. unfetteredbs says:

    susan is on fire again.. look out! nicely done on a tough prompt

  8. Leo says:

    just the way it should be ;) :)

  9. elleceef says:

    “this tentative heart” – such a lovely phrase.

  10. nelle says:

    Tentative is good, teamed with evaluative.

  11. kaykuala says:

    A secret chamber unwittingly stores many secrets! Nicely Susan!

    Hank

  12. kkkkaty says:

    Leaves more to the imagination…nice. BTW, I love your daughter’s self portrait!

  13. Bruce Ruston says:

    really liked it

  14. Green Speck says:

    Lovely use of the prompt !!!

  15. A fine and lovely take on the prompt. This has a romantic feel to it. :-)

  16. Jolly says:

    ‘tentative heart’ liked that a lot…

  17. 4joy says:

    it’s all there in your ‘tentative heart’…..lovely haiku

  18. tentative heart and definitive revelations? If hearts could be see through…..if hearts…
    another great haiku

  19. Must be a lot in there, judging from your frequency of writing :-)

  20. I am well acquainted with a “tentative heart”—because it resides in me!

    Revelation

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