41 thoughts on “September heights: Rain”

1. This piece explains the origins of rain better than any science textbook I ever read!

   • hopefully just a little bit more fun

2. Educating through haiku? Professor Susan in the house

   • hee, hee. Leo–go sit in the corner for disrupting the class, please.

     • No way I’m not a regular student Just a daily visitor

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         • p.s: thank you for the like on FB page

           • most definitely my pleasure

3. Beautiful.

   • Thanks so much, George!

4. comments made me chuckle..

   • fun!

5. Excellent haiku – I love this cycle that is rain.

   • thanks, Elle!

6. with these words, i am not afraid to fall.

   • Oh, Mari–thanking you. Yes, it is infinite, and so peaceful.

     • : )

7. The circle game in water.

   • oh–you are gong to send me off to You-Tube before I go to bed

8. cycle, circles…, water falling and going up over and over again, so beautifully expressed.
   A haiku jewel, Susan.
   Good for the teacher!

   • Oh–thanks, Dulcina!

9. nice, the circle of cycles of rain and there stories

   • Thanks, Bruce.

10. Beautifully said !!!

    • Thanks, GS!

11. wonderfully weaved …you have explained the scientific point through your poetry..lovely!!

    • oh, thank you!

12. Susan, had been a lousy student of science..and I understood something from the comments of everyone..

    But as a poet I have often found myself watching the circles intensely..

    RS:)

    • oh, yes, Ramesh–I believe the water cycle has a mysticism to it.

13. Excellently written. The mystery of rainfall demystefied.

    • thank you, C.

14. I’m sure God will be pleased with your simple explanation of his divine process. And so poetic too

    • I hope so–I certainly would not want to displease…

15. It comes, it goes, it comes again…rain…

    Seven Rains

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16. I love the metaphor and imagery here. Endless circles, life. Very good.

    • oh, thank you, Patti!

17. This is stunningly written. The “infinite circles” is fantastic. I would like it again if the button allowed

    • Oh, Stephen, thank you!

18. a Rachmaninoff of words is what u are!

    • Oh goodness, Deb–thanking you again!

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