19 thoughts on “september rain”

1. I need to write a Shadorma. Again, a wonderful piece with such vivid imagery. You are a very talented woman.

   • oh, gosh, thanks. heads up–the topic for Dverse today is fall. I think I am going to use the one I wrote the pother day, and not this one, to submit.

     • I did REALLY love the one you wrote the other day. I will go to the dverse page and check it out. This one is also good, though.

       • Thanks, Soraya–not up yet until 3…

         • Ah… listed to you! You have informers! Haha… I don’t know whether or not to post as a Haiku or write a full piece about it. Hmmm.

           • Here–go read what Claudia wrote, and see her “hint” at the bottom. God, this woman rocks, btw…

             http://jaywalkingthemoon.wordpress.com/2012/09/08/on-fake-peace-beads-fall-unshaved-legs/

2. Very nice, very true

   • thanks, Boomie!

3. Beautifully written

   • Thank you!

4. you really do these well

   • thanks–try one–but I warn you, they are addictive. No one can write just one…like potato chips!

     • mmm chips

5. No matter the subject, you produce something worthy.

   • oh my, thanks, Nelle

     Likewise, spinner of fiction!

6. If you have a way of communicating with Jeremy, the man to whom you mentioned he should post his poem in dVerse to, could you tell him to check his unmoderated posts or spam? I commented on his poem last night, and tried again this morning. It goes nowhere. I fear it is spam for him. I tried to find a working email address for him, but could not. I hate it when this happens. But since your posts are getting through, maybe you would be kind enough to let him know. Thank you.

   • Mary–I most certainly will!

7. Another fine piece.

   • Oh, thank you, C.

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