becoming this us

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bodies blend to become
this us promised in your hands
how they open to mine
how our eyes echo feeling

this us promised in your hands
painting skin all colors with one touch
how our eyes echo feeling
the way your voice calls my spirit

painting skin all colors with one touch
you scribe alphabets of desire
the way your voice calls my spirit
there is only yes in my breathing

you scribe alphabets of desire
how they open to mine
there is only yes in my breathing
bodies blend to become

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50 thoughts on “becoming this us

  1. nice…really love the form…and hte second stanza is by far my fav….there is nice spirituality and intimacy in that one for me…the painitng of the bodies…great touch….

  2. hedgewitch

    This is a lovely, very effective pantoum, using repetition very adroitly, and some lovely lines as the framework. Enjoyed it very much.

  3. You’ll learn I tend to blush easily! This is lovely, classy and intimate…fantastic form, wonderful to read out loud..this reader is happy! Awesome :)

  4. I’m not one for form, but I know you did a great job with this one. Because so many people write love poems, I think it’s hard to be original. Yet, you are.

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