24 thoughts on “the day moon”

1. I must be addicted to moon poetry because the title had me here faster than i could think. I like the idea of the man in the moon escaping and discovering that its better on the moon yes a poet for sure

   • I have one more from Aryn today–I have to stop stealing lines from my son…I liked the idea too–kind of saw him coming down slowly, like a small spider on silk, but I didn’t ask Aryn about that.

2. It’s recognizing the validity of your son’s viewpoint that gives this poem its power.

   • Thanks, David–I agree.

3. Or he could be channeling David Bowie, I suppose…

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4. The boy really has a great imagination … born to be a writer !!!

   • I think so, too–thanks!

5. The man falling from a moon would make an absolutely wonderful poem

   • Agreed–Boomie!

6. wonderful – i love it

   • Thanks, Kyle.

7. Love it!

   • Thanks, Danny!

8. Out of the mouth of babes, beautiful poetry emerges!

   • Thanks, Noel. Cannot believe what comes out of his mouth–really!

9. he is a mini you

   • He is a little blessing, that’s for sure!

10. Cool… wonder where he gets it? Meanwhile, I hear Echo & The Bunnymen.

    • Ear worm—-oh no……..what to do–listen to it now or fight it for three hours?

11. He is. Indeed.

    • Thanks, Jeremy. My wonderful little man/poet.

12. Like mother, like son

    • I think son is having an earlier start at it!

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