in the south pacific

his war stories
were never about shooting

that army air corps cook
talked more about trading cans

for fruit, or fishing for giant turtles
when the supply ships sank

stretching tea into thin tinted water
to drink with powdered egg breakfasts

when the ships from Australia did not land
he still had soldiers to feed

no glory in the practical
no praise in the day-to-day

but he fed caught or traded meat
to fill the martyr-heroes

as well as the mundane ones
who fueled the planes

he watched U-boats in the distance
prowl like metal sharks smelling blood

one quiet man, feeding other men
who pushed back war

they were all heroes

***for Dverse poetry prompt:  History

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I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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52 Responses to in the south pacific

  1. brian miller says:

    they were all heroes…and the cooks and other support troops were just as needed…often overshadowed by the ones on the front line they def make it possible for the others….bet he still had some pretty cool stories….

  2. Yes, they were (and are still) all heroes. From the cooks to the medics, to the dog handlers, to the mechanics, to the soldiers or the fighter pilots, every one of them a hero. Loved this word paint of someone who obviously saw a lot of it himself and the U boats prowling like metal sharks smelling blood was quite the image.

  3. stretching tea into thin tinted water
    to drink with powdered egg breakfasts

    I just loved those lines as to me you captured an entire era in a few words and that takes some talent. Nicely told heroes tale.

  4. Nice to hear the stories of those that made the food appear and tents arrive. Recent history programme explored how ‘logistics’ was the deciding factor in most battles and wars rather then Generalship’

  5. Susan says:

    “no glory in the practical
    no praise in the day-to-day”–

    Though I see you are fixing that! I love this part:

    “he watched U-boats in the distance
    prowl like metal sharks smelling blood

    one quiet man, feeding other men
    who pushed back war”

  6. Claudia says:

    …and sometimes i think those that are not so obviously seen, that do their work silently and mostly in the dark are the real heroes…how could they have fought without being fed…nice..i like

  7. ManicDdaily says:

    Wonderful wonderful poem. k.

  8. Mary says:

    I enjoyed this poem and your perspective. I definitely think feeding others IS a heroic act.

  9. Because often heroism is the quiet practical acts that don’t get noticed.

  10. hedgewitch says:

    Compelling capture of life in wartime, and of the man. I’ve heard a lot of those war stories in my day, that were the parts they could tell wives and kids…the darker tales, those are not told at home, I think.

  11. Grace says:

    Nice retelling, he and the others who worked behind the scenes are all heroes ~

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  12. marousia says:

    This is a beautiful homage to the cooks and logistic people … they were all heroes along with the troops… this is a great image: “he watched U-boats in the distance
    prowl like metal sharks smelling blood”

  13. Seb says:

    A small arch point in what is otherwise a grand take with some wonderful personal touches – would one have been looking for U-Boats in the South Pacific? We’rent they in the Atlantic? Or was U-Boats a generic term for submersibles?

  14. lucychili says:

    war is such a distortion of life
    cooking is a kind of gift
    they are a vivid contrast

  15. Dammm straight, all heroes. Excellente presentation! Luved the line work.

  16. shewritesherenow says:

    those final lines… beautiful

  17. danadampier says:

    My father was a cook in the Air Force for a couple years… he also worked in the hangers.They are all heros… they gave their time and alot of times their life for us,

  18. Mama Zen says:

    Not a wasted word. I love it!

  19. Thanks for your comments, guys.

  20. kez says:

    Every army and soldier marches so they say on their stomach ..so long live cooks as heros ! loved this thank you x

  21. SaraV says:

    Susan you penned a beautiful tribute. Very touching and true.

  22. ds says:

    They also serve who only stand and…cook. And are so often unrecognized. Thank you for reminding us that heroes are not only to be found on the front lines.

  23. ‘stretching tea into thin tinted water
    to drink with powdered egg breakfasts’ Great lines, Susan.

  24. Often the heroes toiling in the background are not sung! A daughter fills this gap, thanks to her attentive ear, a wonderful memory, nimble fingers, a warm voice and an arresting tongue!.

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