sky mirrors water
tonight, I will shatter stars
with just one small stone
50 thoughts on “Haiku Heights Prompt: Stars”
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sky mirrors water
tonight, I will shatter stars
with just one small stone
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Gorgeous haiku!
Thank you, Kelli.
fantastic haiku. Really nailed it
Thank you! I meant to put it in drafts–it is out before the link is
a little sneak peak
Yes–I am not putting it back in drafts now, too lazy…
Excellent Haiku
Mmmmmm. Cool to ripple the reflection.
Thanks, Susan.
Gorgeous haiku, Susan
Right on the dot.
Leo
Obviously
YOU suggested it.
LOL, I know! Thanks for using it… Shame on me for not thanking you first…
Beautifully creative. Great image.You have captured the essence of a haiku.
Thank you so much!
This Haiku is a real beauty! Lovely thought… Enjoyed it a lot!
Behold! My Stars Shine.
Thank you, Pranita–going to check yours out now!
LOVED your haiku! Beautiful imagery, Susan! Thanks for the excellent prompt.
Thank you Vaishali!
Lovely imagination !!!
Lovely haiku, I specially like the last line ~
Thank you Grace
Great work. Very (heh heh heh) reflective
hehehe!
I can see all of them getting splattered.. beautiful ..among the best for the imagery i have read or written for a long time.. well done.. Thanks..!!!
Oh my, Ramesh–thanks!
splendid……
thanks.
such a dreamy feel to your lovely words…..
thank you!
Perfect imagery! A Van Gogh in language !
Thank you, Deb! Can I keep my ear though?
very nice
Amazing imagery
Thanks, guys!
Perfect!
Thanks, hon
Thank you for the prompt, a magical one! I love the image you created with your haiku, except for the word “shatter.” But maybe that’s the meaning you intended? Like shattered dreams?
Yes, I see what you mean. It’s a very vivid image. I was interpreting a deeper meaning in “shatter.” Sometimes everyone reads something different into a haiku beyond the literal meaning. Good thing about a reflection is that the stars stil remain intact and beautiful, like a dream renewed. Thanks for sharing–thought provoking
Thanks Lorena
really good work!
Thanks!
And what a great deluge there will be. Lovely haiku
Thank you Celestine!
a colossal expression! awe and awe!
*takes a bow*
Wow–thanks so much!
Stunning imagery. Absolutely beautiful.
Thanks so much, Gretchen