Haiku Heights Prompt: Stars

sky mirrors water
tonight, I will shatter stars
with just one small stone

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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50 Responses to Haiku Heights Prompt: Stars

  1. Mama Zen says:

    Gorgeous haiku!

  2. unfetteredbs says:

    fantastic haiku. Really nailed it

  3. Susan says:

    Mmmmmm. Cool to ripple the reflection.

  4. Leo says:

    Gorgeous haiku, Susan :) Right on the dot.


  5. Rallentanda says:

    Beautifully creative. Great image.You have captured the essence of a haiku.

  6. Pranita says:

    This Haiku is a real beauty! Lovely thought… Enjoyed it a lot! :)

    Behold! My Stars Shine.

  7. LOVED your haiku! Beautiful imagery, Susan! Thanks for the excellent prompt. :)

  8. Green Speck says:

    Lovely imagination !!!

  9. Grace says:

    Lovely haiku, I specially like the last line ~

  10. Ron. says:

    Great work. Very (heh heh heh) reflective

  11. Ramesh Sood says:

    I can see all of them getting splattered.. beautiful ..among the best for the imagery i have read or written for a long time.. well done.. Thanks..!!!

  12. 4joy says:

    such a dreamy feel to your lovely words…..

  13. Deborah Avila says:

    Perfect imagery! A Van Gogh in language !

  14. Ian Moone says:

    very nice

  15. tigerbrite says:

    Amazing imagery :)

  16. Rhonda says:


  17. Thank you for the prompt, a magical one! I love the image you created with your haiku, except for the word “shatter.” But maybe that’s the meaning you intended? Like shattered dreams? :)

  18. cruxrebels says:

    really good work! :D

  19. And what a great deluge there will be. Lovely haiku

  20. S Jayanth says:

    a colossal expression! awe and awe!
    *takes a bow*

  21. Gretchen Leary says:

    Stunning imagery. Absolutely beautiful.

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