when you smile my name

this feeling opens
from the toes up
hums joy
deeper than sweet

more gentle
than any hands

& belongs to you

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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14 Responses to when you smile my name

  1. Rhonda says:

    That’s a nice smile!

  2. jomul7 says:

    there’s nothing sweeter than smiling someone’s name. I like that title and everything about this poem. Brought a smile to my face :)

  3. unfetteredbs says:

    hums joy
    What a happy image you create in a few simple words Susan!
    Enjoyed this one with my coffee this morning. Perked me up

  4. Deborah Avila says:

    delicate and tenuous ~ a web that’s too breakable ~ BEAUTIFUL ~Deb

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